Monday, 27 August 2018

Show, Don't Tell

For writing I am researching about Yohan Blake. This terms theme is "Move ya body" and my class has been doing show don't tell this week. This presentation is about some athletes and we got to pick an athlete to write about and my athlete was Yohan Blake the reason why I picked him was because we couldn't pick Usain Bolt cause my teacher knew that we would know a lot of information about Usain Bolt. 

1 comment:

  1. This is great, Anna. That is a really descriptive and creative paragraph in slide 5, well done. Particularly like how you are starting each sentence in different ways, for example 'At the beginning..', 'Finally...', 'Everyone was...', 'As he got to...' etc. All these are great sentence starters to keep the flow of the paragraph going.
    Keep up the good work Anna.