Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 27 August 2018

Show, Don't Tell


For writing I am researching about Yohan Blake. This terms theme is "Move ya body" and my class has been doing show don't tell this week. This presentation is about some athletes and we got to pick an athlete to write about and my athlete was Yohan Blake the reason why I picked him was because we couldn't pick Usain Bolt cause my teacher knew that we would know a lot of information about Usain Bolt. 

Wednesday, 6 December 2017

Reflection of 2017

Reflection of 2017 

This year was a roller coaster, being a year seven was different from being the other years, because when you are a year seven you have to show the younger kids that you can be a leader next year. 

One of my favourite thing I did this year is going to tech at Tamaki College. There are about 4 or 5 groups which are Hard Materials, Carving, Graphics and Cooking I have been in all the groups but not Carving but hopefully I do it next year.

This year I applied to be a house captain for 2018 for the house Te Aurere. If I get picked next year to be a house captain that would be awesome for me and my family. 

I get to show that I am a great role model for the little kids and that hopefully they would look up to me and be leader when they become a year 8.  

Wednesday, 25 October 2017

My Journey Being In Team 5

My Journey Being In Team 5
Have you ever been wondering what's it like to be a senior in team 5?? Well I will tell you about my journey throughout this year. Being in team 5 you have to be the leaders at Point England School.
My time at Point England School in team 5 has been awesome because I have met lots of kind and encouraging students and teachers. Being in team 5 is the most hardest team to be in because you have lots of jobs to do around the school. One of my favourite terms has to be term 2 because when the year 8’s left to camp the year 7’s stayed at Point England School we did lots of fun activities it felt like the year 7’s were at a even better camp than the year 8's.
I have been at Point England School for about 4 years, nearly almost everyone started Point England School at 5 years old, but I came to Point England School when I was a year 3 it was like an adventure because I was in a class with year 4 students, it was like being in a class with my older siblings it was so decorated and in the room had lots of different colours, my teacher was beautiful her name was Mrs Nalder and she was an amazing teacher. She teaches me different kinds of awesome things. Then I came up to year 7 which took so long.
Team 5 is the oldest team at Point England School we are older than all the other teams so that makes us the leaders for Point England School. At team 5 there are different unique students they have there own talent which is so amazing. Being in team 5 we start school at 8:30, we also wear different kinds of uniform such as culottes and a black hat we sit on chairs at assembly which is an so amazing.
It is an honour to be in team 5 because I have lots of different kinds of teachers who help me learn and I have friends who are supportive and friendly it’s my second to last year at Point England School and being in team 5. It was the longest journey I have been in, this school was a bit different from all the schools I have been to. But sooner or later everyone will leave this awesome school. Point England School is the best school I have been to!!!

Monday, 28 August 2017

Speech Finals

On Friday the 25th of August at 12:00 team 5 all went to go sit down on the streets, we were getting ready to hear the speech finalist competition, there were about 13 competitor who attended the finals, it was a mix of girls and boys. 


Image result for Amelia @ pt england schoolThe first person to say there speech was Amelia, her speech was about her pass with her grandma working at her old school Riverina Primary School, she was talking about her grandma smiling while cleaning stinky toilets but when she passed away she really knew why she was smiling she was smiling because she saw her and and her little sister Monika. What I liked about this speech was she was talking about her life and at the end she said " My grandma was smiling because she saw her beautiful cheeky granddaughter". 
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My favourite speech was Lotu because her speech was so interesting because she was talking about having a simple life, two of my favourite quotes that she said is " Find good people and leave the bad ones" and "Live, Laugh and Love because you only come around once. She had a great hook that said " People do alot of dumb things when they hit the age 12 and over. 

All these speeches were so interesting one or two of them will say there speech at assembly. 


Wednesday, 10 May 2017

Simple Complex Sentences

Turn these simple sentences into complex sentences:

1: I went to the shop while my mum was sleeping

2: I hate basketball because I don’t know how to play.

3: I have a friend called Andrea she is really kind

4: The kittens were adopted by the family because there real owner was allergic to cats.

5: Peanut butter and jam sandwiches are my favourite because they taste delicious. 

6: The surprise party was organised by Wendy’s two best friends while I went to buy food. 

7: Charlie could not hear his watch ticking because dad was snoring

8: Sara owned a dog while I was eating food.

9: We have apples in the fridge because dad works for a fruit shop.

10: Mrs Judd went to Samoa while her husband was looking after her family.

Tuesday, 2 May 2017

TECHNOLOGICAL PROCESS.


TECHNOLOGICAL PROCESS.


Today we were learning about Technological process, We made a jelly bean tooth pick structure. First we brained stormed what we were going to do. Then we research the best way to build a jelly bean tooth pick structure. After that we Plan/Design what will it look like, we also created it and we presented it to my class. When we tested our structure it could only hold up two books. What will I change about my structure? I would have made it stronger or longer. I really want to try this and hope you try it. After the contest we got to eat our jelly beans.

We tried to make this but it almost looked exacted like it.

Monday, 10 April 2017

🌺Giant Gone Missing🌺

🌺Giant Gone Missing🌺

It has been written that the giant has gone missing. We searched the giant’s house and have found a clue.

The clue belongs to Jack he was the last one who had the magic beans. Finally as we found Jack he said he didn’t do it. We were trying to find the Giant's body. But we have found security footage plugged into a house nearby. In the footage we only can see that the giant was pushed from his house high above.

We do not know who pushed the Giant.

Pigeon Impossible Explanation

Pigeon Impossible Explanation

We are writing about why/ why not is it the pigeon’s fault from making the whole city almost blow up. I think it was not the pigeon’s fault because…


First reason why it is not the pigeon fault is because if the man didn’t leave his briefcase open the pigeon won’t be in the briefcase destroying almost the whole town.

Simple & Compond Words

WALT: Identify & Write simple and compound sentences

Friday, 24 March 2017

My Year Of Being A Year 7

My Year Of Being A Year 7
This year is a fun year because when I am a year 7 means I can be friends with new people who are year 8’s. In team 5 it is way different from the other classes I have been in.

Firstly what is different from the other classes is that when go to Tamaki College for Tech in tech there about 4 groups which are called: Hard Materials, Carving, Graphics, and Cooking. This term I am in graphics, in graphics we draw, make 3-D object. We do everything that include shapes and colours.

Secondly It is different because every Friday after lunch we have a game of sports we compete with other classes in Team 5 for the past few weeks I have played only Tag and Cricket we play these sports because we have to show teamwork and leadership and to be a role model to the younger kids.

Lastly another reason is we have to be at school at 8:30am and have to be at the streets we have an assembly. While the other kids are outside playing we are inside the streets having our own assembly. In the assembly we talk about what we will be doing today and some notes to remember, while we are in classes one of the notes we always use is be flexible which means to be normal and to respect everyone in your class.

One of my goals in team 5 will have to be getting better grades than last year and to be a great role model to the little kids.

Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Why People Need To Drink Water

Explanation Writing - What Makes A Good Friend

Explanation Writing

In this explanation writing I am writing about what makes a good friend. A good friend is trustworthy, Loyal, and caring.

Trustworthy Friends.

Trustworthy friends are people who are can trust each other and be worthy. How do you know when you want to trust your friend? If you have a friend you have to trust them because she/he have to know you like them as friend.

Loyal Friends.

Loyal friends is someone who supports you in everything. For Example: If you fall down when you are playing a game and they are on the side line they will just cheer you on.  

Caring Friends.

Caring friends is someone who cares about you. For Example: If someone hurt your feeling they will try to cheer you up but doing a funny face or dancing weirdly. Also if you hurt your self your friend will take you to the nurse’s office/sickbay.

Friends are a really good thing to have in your life because you can talk to them about anything.

Friday, 17 March 2017

On Our Way To Poly Fest


On Our Way To Poly Fest

Have you ever been to Poly fest before? Well Team 5 went on a long trip to Poly Fest.

Our trip yesterday was for our education and people who are shy about there culture get an opportunity to make them feel confident. Also we when there to know more about their cultures and to understand more. Poly Fest is a good festival to go to because you get to learn about cultures you didn’t know about also you get free stuff and some of the stalls you win stuff.

When we got out of the bus there were other schools lining up it was so crowded I couldn’t go through any one then when we finally made it past the long line we went to sit down and we sang some songs. After that long wait we went to some stalls the first one my group went to was the digital poi. We had to go in groups of five in the digital poi. A digital poi is something that is a poi and it lights up and it is really cool. Team 5 got free bags, glasses, fans and a poster from the ASB truck which made us feel amazing.

I think it is important for students who participate because they need to learn what their cultures is about and what is means they also have to be confident about their culture. What i think is amazing about students performing in the polyfest is they get perform and show people this is what their culture is and this is how it works. They also get to show off their dance skills.

I have explained about what is important for student who participated in the polyfest. Also I explained what is fun about polyfest. If I had a chance to go there I would definitely go there with my family.  

Friday, 24 February 2017

How to have a fun weekend -Writing.

How to have a fun weekend
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
How to have a fun weekend
Introduction
In this writing I am going to talk to you about things you can do to have a fun weekend.
Information
1st element
First idea to have fun weekend is: go hang out with your friends. Things to do with your friends, If it is a hot day you can have a water squirt. If it is a rainy day you can plan a sleepover or play board games like: Jenga, Monopoly, Puzzles, or play card games. When you have a sleepover you can have a midnight feast which is you wake up until midnight which is 12:00 am and you sneak into the kitchen and grab all the junk food in the fridge and cupboards and you run to your room and you eat som of the junk food and your mum or dad will come into the room staring at you eating all the food.
Information
2nd element
Another Idea to have fun on the weekend is to spend time with your family, you could have a BBQ with your whole family and you can get together and meet one another. You could all go to watch a movie together and have popcorn and drinks. Or you could go to do the swimming and bring cake or cupcakes and after your swim you can have a big feast with cakes and cupcakes.  Your family could also have fancy dinner and go to restaurants like Valentines or go Burger King, McDonald, KFC, or you could go to great tongs and you could have sweet and sour with is pork with this yum red sauce.
Information
3rd element
Last Idea to have fun on the weekends is you could spend time with next door neighbour because you have to know something about the person living next to you, the person at the back of I know her because we just meet and we talked about a lot of stuff and then they moved to my school Pt England and he name is Amelia she is a year 8. So you should talk with your next door neighbour and then you play with them a lot then you will be so used to them you might even have sleep overs or you will give her/he a invitation to you birthday party or take he/her to a trip to the zoo, rainbow end, parakai, or something that you both like. You could also take them to a game of netball if it is a girl but if it is a boy you could take him to a game of rugby, or basketball.
Conclusion
So to have fun weekend is  to spend time with people you love and people you want to be friends with. Spend time with people you don't know but you might know a little something about them.

Thursday, 22 December 2016

Summer Learning Journey - Day 5 - Week 1 - Activity 2 - More Books

I have to write about this read the following three reviews of books that are really popular right now in Canada. If you had to choose one for Curious Kiwi to read on the plane, which one would you choose? Post the name of the book that you would chose on your blog. Below the title explain why you would choose that book. The 3 reviews are:

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Book 1: Catching Fire (The Hunger Games #2) by Suzanne Collins
Against all odds, Katniss has won the Hunger Games. She and fellow District 12 tribute Peeta Mellark are miraculously still alive. Katniss should be relieved, happy even. After all, she has returned to her family and her longtime friend, Gale. Yet nothing is the way Katniss wishes it to be. Gale holds her at an icy distance. Peeta has turned his back on her completely. And there are whispers of a rebellion against the Capitol - a rebellion that Katniss and Peeta may have helped create. Much to her shock, Katniss has fueled an unrest she's afraid she cannot stop. And what scares her even more is that she's not entirely convinced she should try. As time draws near for Katniss and Peeta to visit the districts on the Capitol's cruel Victory Tour, the stakes are higher than ever. If they can't prove, without a shadow of a doubt, that they are lost in their love for each other, the consequences will be horrifying.
Book 2: Matilda by Roald DahlC:\Users\rwil313\Desktop\Matilda book cover.jpg
Matilda is a sweet, exceptional young girl, but her parents think she's just a nuisance. She expects school to be different but there she has to face Miss Trunchbull, a kid-hating terror of a headmistress. When Matilda is attacked by the Trunchbull she suddenly discovers she has a remarkable power with which to fight back. It'll take a superhuman genius to give Miss Trunchbull what she deserves and Matilda may be just the one to do it!
Book 3: Diary of a Wimpy Kid – The Ugly TruthC:\Users\rwil313\Desktop\DoaWK image.jpg
Greg Heffley has always been in a hurry to grow up. But is getting older really all it’s cracked up to be? Greg suddenly finds himself dealing with the pressures of boy-girl parties, increased responsibilities, and even the awkward changes that come with getting older—all without his best friend, Rowley, at his side. Can Greg make it through on his own? Or will he have to face the “ugly truth.”

I deiced to choose Diary of a Wimpy Kid because I love there books. I always read this book when I was 7-9 years old but when I was seven my sister or parents will read it to me. It is about his personal life. I have even seen one of there movies, which was awesome.

Friday, 16 December 2016

Summer Learning Journey - Australia- Day 1 - Week 1

Australia

Activity 1

I would like to visit the country Australia because I really want to see animals I haven't seen like kangaroo's and koala's. Also I think it would be fun because all the hot beaches with the beautiful sea. Some of my family live in Australia so I would love to go and meet them. I might even see people from the pass like my old teachers and my old friends.

Activity 2

Australia is the 6th larges country in the earth

Australia has more reptiles than any other country, they have over 750 reptiles living in there area.

The worlds largest reef system is in the North-Eastern Coast of Australia and it is called the

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