The Egg In The Bottle Experiment

WALT: Hypothesis what do you think will happen in this experiment. Write a conclusion and say what it happened.

LOST IN THE FOREST

WALT: Narrate a story about a person who is lost in the forest while camping.

LOST IN THE FOREST!!

One day there was a girl named Bryana, she went to the year six camp with her class at Kawau Island. She was in the bus with her two friends named: Kerstein and Myztique.

They were lots of activities at their camp, It was night time Bryana went to sleep. She was feeling happy the whole day she couldn’t wait for tomorrow.

The next day she woke up she felt scared because there was no one at the camp she ran outside no one even her friends were not there, she felt like she was going to be like killed or she might get kidnapped. But she was walking around the forest she said in her mind “I’m lost.”

She walked around with a sore stomach she looked every where all she found was a lake and a broken tent, then there was a light bulb in here head “TING” she remembered that she watched a movie about surviving in the forest but suddenly she heard something…

“Bryana where are you” called a familiar voice she ran and said “How is calling my name” She ran every she heard another familiar voice “ Bryana it’s me Kerstein and Myztique.” Bryana screamed “ WHERE ARE YOU.”

She ran then she saw two girls standing next to a tree they were smiling Kerstein and Myztique ran to Bryana they hugged Bryana so tight and Kerstein said “ Where did you go” They missed each so bad so they just walked together all the way to the bus.

The Bush

WALT: Write a narrative

One beautiful sunny day there was a girl named Bryana and her 2 friends called Kerstein and Myztique. Bryana had an idea, she said to Kerstein “Let’s go to the bush, in the forest I heard there is something scary about it.” Kerstein said “ Ahh..I don’t think that's a good idea.” “Don’t be such a scarey cat”Bryana replied “Well I’m not going” replied Kerstein. “Fine I’ll go with Myztique” Bryana said angrily.“No thank you I’ll stay here with Kerstein and watch a movie with her.” “Fine I’ll go by myself” Screamed Bryana.

Bryana put her Coat on,her red boots, also she took a flashlight and she wore the darkest jeans she ever had in her closet. She walked slowly out the door then she started to run. She was finally at the bush she walked slowly she found a big bush right in front of her, the bush was moving for some reason, Bryana screamed “ AHHHH..HELP” there was no reply. She screamed louder, but no one heard her.

She ran so fast all she saw was black bushes, green bushes, Dark Blue bushes all kind of bushes. But suddenly she saw it was getting dark she reached for she flashlight, nothing was there, Bryana thought in her head “ I think I dropped it when I was running” She was trapped in the dark with weird looking bushes and scary bushes. She screamed so loud there was a loud echo. Bryana fell to the ground she was so scared and so cold her lips started to shiver.

At home Kerstein heard something “Did you hear that” “ No not a thing, the only thing a hear is the sound of Maleficent laughing” Myztique replied. “SHH, there it goes again...wait a minute where is Bryana” Kerstein asked. “Well she is at the forest looking at the bushes” Myztique replied. “OMG, let’s go we need to find Bryana” Kerstein screamed “HURRY UP MYZTIQUE” Kerstein said angrily. They both ran out the door. They were at the forest, they saw the big bush. They just ran to try to find Bryana. Then suddenly they saw Bryana on the floor she was so scared that she cried.

The bush was moving they ran out the forest but it was so dark they didn’t even know where they were going, but then Bryana tripped she looked down it was her flashlight, the wind started howling it felt like a hurricane. Bryana picked her flashlight up and turned it on the light was so bright, so the three best friends walked out of the scary bush forest. Bryana didn’t want to ever go to the forest to look at the bushes in her whole life. But then Bryana said to Myztique and Kerstein “For now on we have to go everywhere together, even if it is scary for you”

Holiday Highlight

WALT: Explain what you did in the holidays.

Have you ever played for a club? I played for the Niue team in netball. In the holidays I went to the netball courts, with my 2 sisters and my parents. My mum and my sisters walked in the courts and saw every country in there lines and singing the national anthem. All the lines were so long. I played for the under 11 girls team.

My manager told all of my team to walk to court 21. We played our first game against Tonga, all the girls asked who was captain and my coach picked me. We played and played until we LOST!! But is was a hard game but at least we tried ad had fun. Our next game was on court 19 and we were playing against Cooks-land. It was a close game because we just lost by one point. But we just found out that we had our last game in Court 20, we were playing against Samoa. But it was cool we both won, because it was a draw.

When we finished playing our netball game, my coach gave us some lollies to eat which was delicious. But at the end we took some photo’s and it was so sad because we only see each other at in only one more week, for prize giving. But after that we watched my sister’s team play against Tonga but they won also they came 2nd in the pacific challenge.

I was so tired and I just wanted to go sleep when we go back to home. I wish we do it again next year. But I love playing netball.

Olympic Narrative

WALT: Narrate a story about an Olympic athlete getting lost in Barra, Rio

One day Valerie Adams went to the airport to go fly to Brazil, Barra because she is going to compete in the Olympics. Valerie Adams was competing for the women’s shot put, when she got to Barra she hopped into a bus to the mall.

One day Valerie Adams went to the airport to go fly to Brazil, Barra because she is going to compete in the Olympics. Valerie Adams was competing for the women’s shot put, when she got to Barra she hopped into a bus to the mall.

But when Valerie was looking outside when she looked out of the window she was that the bus went past the mall. She was screaming “ STOP, STOP THE BUS, I NEED TO GET OFF!!” But the bus driver didn’t listen, Valerie Adams started to cry but quietly.

Suddenly the bus stopped, Valerie wiped her tears away. “GET OFF”  the bus driver shouted. Everyone went out of the bus but Valerie was confused. She didn’t even know where she was. Everyone left but Valerie Adams was just staring, her stomaching started aching, she was so cold.

After a few hours she saw some cars coming, she waved her hands. Then a light blue car stopped and said “Do you need help” “ Yes, I do thanks for your help” replied Valerie Adams. “ Can you take me to the mall in Barra” said Valerie Adams, so they drove off.

It took 2 hours to get to the mall, finally Valerie Adams got to the mall. She thanked the driver and she went into the mall. She went to the Olympics and came 2nd in the shot put.

Hiwi the Kiwi

WALT: Write a narrative including lessons learnt from Hiwi the Kiwi.

One day I went fishing with my Grandad, we went to go pick up Kerstein. Then we drove four hours to Waikato river. Kerstein and I were so tired, Then we were finally here.

We hopped in the boat got the bait ready it was slimy and it smelled like stinky rotten apples. We put our life jackets on but my grandad didn’t want to put a life jacket on. but he “ No I’m an adult I don't have to wear a life jacket”. But Kerstein and I said “ IF YOU SAY SO.”

I got a little sea sick but Kerstein was there to cheer me up. We all got our fishing rods, it took for ages we waited, and waited until the boat started to move around. my grandpa kept on screaming “AHHH SOMEONE GET ME A LIFE JACKET.”

I remember I saw a life jacket in the captain's room so I ran to the room and I reached for it I ran back to my Grandpa and gave it to him, he quickly buckled up but luckily the boat stopped moving.

But my Grandad learned his lesson to wear a life jacket if you go on a boat or on the water.

NZ Olympia Profile

WALT: Create a character profile on an athlete in the New Zealand Olympic team. 
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The Independence Games

WALT: Understand the authors point of view

Cindy Lympics

WALT: Understand the author's point of view

Olympics dictogloss

The 2008 Olympics were held in Beijing,China. It was the first time women could compete in boxing. Woman from Brunei, Qatar, Saudi Arabia were allowed to participate. This was considered a big deal because women from these country were not equal with men. The game in China were one of the most expensive Olympics in history.

Dictogloss

WALT: Listen and remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph.

Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner. "Mmm yum. Mum makes the best meatballs in the world!", My sister remarked. I ate lots of spaghetti, "HAHAHA!" I laughed as my brother spilt sauce all over his white shirt. "You've got sauce all over your face too" my sister added. I love when mum makes spaghetti.

My score was 9 out of 10.

Level Ten

WALT: Retell the story again in your own words.

Movies

WALT: Identify where speech mark go in our writing.

Philip asked, "Mum are we going to the movie?" It was the holidays after all."First you need to tidy your room and help put the dishes away then we can go", replied Mum. Philip work like crazy getting his room clean and helping mum with the dishes. "This is going to be the best day ever!"explained Philip he was bursting with 

excitement. 

I think I deserve a 10 out of 10

Describe Spiderman

Peter Parker was bitten by a highly enhanced spider. That gave him superpowers that includes: strength, agility, spider senses and scale buildings. He is a superhero that protects mankind. With great power comes great responsibility.

Spider man wears a blue and red costume with a mask to keep his identity a secret. He is a protected of mankind with great powers comes great responsibility. 

Dictagloss WK 7

WALT:  Write what is  being dictated us, word of word.

The Cursed Treasure

Captain Morgan Adams was tyrant, a pirate bent on causing mayhem and habick. Across the seven seas but also a enemy of the British empire. Along with his crew they had boarded smaller ships and taken their booty for keeping. This all changed when they came across the cursed treasure of Davy Jones locker.

This is a story about a pirate named Captain Morgan Adam, Hope you enjoyed the writing. Please check out my other post, BYE!!.

Kiwi Fruit

WALT: Find out more information and share three facts about Kiwifruit in New Zealand

1. What is another name for kiwifruit? A Chinese gooseberry

2. What shape are kiwifruit? Oval

3. What’s inside the kiwifruit? edible seeds

4. What does a kiwi fruit taste like? sour, sweet but unique

5. Why did they change the name to kiwifruit in 1959? After the New Zealand national bird it is called the kiwi, small, furry and brown