Monday 29 February 2016

Volcano's of the world

Walt: Understand vocabulary that is more difficult and specific
I learnt how to pin volcanoes on Google Maps, It is very fun we had to follow the instructions on my doc to get this onto my blog. I did 12 volcanoes, how many volcanoes can you pin? Here is a link to go to my Google Maps. Click Here. Also those red shaped balloons, that's were some of my volcanoes are. For Example: There is 3 volcano's at Canada. Also I know that there is a volcano at Samoa and it is called Matavanu. Hope you enjoy my blog, Please leave a comment.
BYE!!

The Cat At The Beach

Walt: narrate a story that involves a cat, at the beach and a friend needs help

It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Kerstein the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. Her master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly her friend Nyree came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.


“Why the long face?” asked Kerstein “My grandma died” replied Nyree, Kerstein said “ I am so sorry about your grandma but would you like to do something, maybe a game?”. “ No actually I don’t feel like a game today, maybe tomorrow?” Said Nyree. Kerstein did everything to cheer up Nyree, but she always said “NO”.


Nyree will always say to Kerstein “ What do you think my grandma is doing right now?”. Kerstein said “ Come on let’s get Ice- cream”, “OK” said Nyree. So Kerstein and Nyree walked to their master and they saw him eating a ice-cream Kerstein and Nyree started to dig the sand the master was so confused “ What are doing” said the master. The master didn't know what they were doing so the master just gave his ice-cream to Kerstein and Nyree. So Nyree was so happy she had forgotten about her grandma.

Here is a story about at cat named Kerstein and Nyree that went to the beach






The disappearance

The disappearance


One afternoon a girl named Sheales was playing outside, her mother came outside and said
“ Sheales can you go and buy me some milk please.” “ Yes mum” said Sheales. So her mum gave her the money and she started to walk to the shops.


While she was walking she was singing as well “ LA LA LA LA” said Sheales, Then Sheales tripped she had hurt herself so badly, she was screaming so LOUD. After that she started to calm down but then she saw a black shadow, it was a man. Sheales said “ Who are you?” The man replied “ Hi my name is Mr Somerville I am a teacher at Pt England School, I heard you screaming so I ran all the way here.”


Mr Somerville and Sheales was talking for a long time, but  while they were talking they saw a car came past and then it just disappeared. Sheales was very scared she said to Mr Somerville “W-What just happened,” Mr Somerville replied “ Well a car came past and it just disappeared, Why?” Mr Somerville didn't care what happened but Sheales did she was shaking so fast, There were no cars on the road.


Mr Somerville said “ Look.” “Look at what?” Said Sheales “ The trees were fading.” Sheales and Mr Somerville were panicking “ HELP HELP” said Sheales and Mr Somerville nobody replied back because the people were fading as well.  The only people that were alive was Sheales and Mr Somerville, Sheales was wondering if her mum was still alive. So she ran home with Mr Somerville, but Mr Somerville couldn't catch up to Sheales she was too fast.


They finally made it to Sheales’s house. Sheales rushed to the door she knocked on the door,  but nobody was home, she saw a window it was open Sheales told Mr Somerville to get on the floor but Mr Somerville said “ But I just brought these new pants, I don’t want to mess it up” “ Hurry up” said Sheales so Mr Somerville went on the floor his pants got muddy, Sheales climbed into the window then she jumped into the house she opened the door for Mr Somerville. They looked everywhere but her mum was nowhere to be found.


“ It’s ok, you will have to live with me then” said Mr Somerville Sheales was so sad, but they heard a knock on the door  Sheales rushed to the door and it was her mum she gave her a big hug. “ I brought the milk because you didn't get it” said Sheales’s mum. So Sheales introduced Mr Somerville to her mum and they were best friends. So they lived happily ever after.

The missing family

Walt: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word.

The missing family


Something strange was happening.One by one, things were disappearing. First my mum, then my dad and now my sister were all gone. It was job to investigate for sudden disappearance and find a solution.



My score out of 10 is: 10

Monday 22 February 2016

Maths Problem Solving Week 1

Walt: Add two numbers together 


Miss West and Mr Somerville teaches me how to add two numbers together. Hope you enjoy, Please leave a comment.

Dictogloss

Walt: Write what is being dedicated to us, word to word. 

Max’s Camping Trip
Max could see from the distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father was yelling “ How could you forget the food?” To which the mother replied. “ It was a honest mistake, I'm sure someone will help us".

My score out of 14 is: 14


Friday 19 February 2016

Te Waka O Aoraki

Walt: Retell the story again in our own words.


  1. What had Aoraki and his brothers set out to do?
             Aoraki and his brothers were going fishing.
  1. Explain why was Aoraki distracted while he was chanting his karakia?
              He got distracted because his brothers were scared.
  1. Which part of the canoe was stuck in the ocean and which part launched into space? Stern was stuck and the bow went to space.
  2. Why couldn't they return back to the sky? Because they crashed
  3. Explain why the brothers turned to stone? Because the magic had broken the karakia spell.
  4. Where are Aoraki and his brothers now? South Island.

                             Here is a paragraph about the story.

Aoraki was the son of ranginui the sky father and his mother was papatuanuku. One day Aoraki and his brothers wanted to go home but they couldn't go because they turned into stone. Aoraki and his brothers became the mountains of the Southern Alps with Aoraki ( Mount Cook) the highest peak.


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Thursday 18 February 2016

Wednesday 17 February 2016

Narrative Writing

Walt: narrate a story that involves a boy, camping and a family that needs food.


The Hungry Family
One morning Bob and his friends wanted to go camping at Kawau Island because it was his birthday.So mum dropped off Bob and his friends but it was a long ride it took  about 3 ½ hours. They finally made it so they put their tents up.

Once they finished Bob suggested “ Let's go and explore the woods”. They walked a long way until they saw a family who were very sad. Bob said “ Umm excuse why are you sad?” The father said “ Well my family and I forgot our food,Can you please hand me some of your food? We are starving” So then Bob ran to the camping site to see if there was some more food but…..




Bob tripped and saw the bushes moving, his heart was pounding very hard his throat was dry then he heard someone said his name “Bob”.Bob thought for one second he had goosebumps. After that Bob was too scared so he just ran.

Bob finally made it to the camping site then Bob dived into the tent, he threw everything out of the tent, Then he raced to the family they were still sitting on the floor so then, Bob and the father had a long conversation about how they had left their food at home.

So Bob felt sad and confused at the same time, Bob looked at the little kids crying because they were hungry so Bob gave some of his food and said “ But next time remember your food”
The Family were so thankful, Bob and his friends walked back to their camping site and the family lived happily ever after.  

Thursday 11 February 2016

Crocodile Creche

WALT: Gather information about salt water crocodile and present it on our blog

Here is a little information about salt water crocodlies

Graphic Organiser, Three Little Pigs.

WALT: Describe characters from the three little pigs


In a narartive there are three part in a stort

Wednesday 10 February 2016

All About Me 2016

WALT: share some information about ourselves


Here is a little bit about me, Hope you enjoy.

The Three little pigs

Walt: Describe characters from the three little pigs. 

Here is some words about the three little pigs. Hope you enjoy



Wednesday 3 February 2016

Kiwi Fruit

WALT: Find out more information and share three facts about Kiwifruit in New Zealand



  1. What is another name for kiwifruit? A Chinese gooseberry

  1. What shape are kiwifruit? Oval

  1. What’s inside the kiwifruit? edible seeds

  1. What does a kiwi fruit taste like? sour, sweet but unique


  1. Why did they change the name to kiwifruit in 1959? After the New Zealand national bird it is called the kiwi, small, furry and brown