Tuesday 5 April 2016

Pirate Land

WALT: Narrate a story about a pirate, on an island and treasure is found.


Pirate Land

Once upon a time there lived a pirate named Captain Hook. He was known as a nasty pirate because he never cared about anyone and he would always force his enemies to walk the plank. Captain Hook and his crew sailed the seven seas, in a ship called Royal fortune. Captain Hook wore a black patch over his right eye, He wears stripy clothes. He also liked to wears black boots. He never had a shower.


One day Captain Hook and his crew were sailing and in a distance they saw a island. They hopped out of their ship and they walked past the wet sand they saw a forest Captain Hook said “ Come on let's go explore the woods.” His crew said to him “ But Captain it is dark and scary. “Stop being scared” Captain Hook replied.
Captain Hook and his crew walked past the trees.


They saw something shiny they ran to the shiny thing it was a treasure chest they opened it. The treasure was full of gold then someone jumped up from the bushes it was another pirate they trapped him. The pirate said to Captain Hook “ Hello my name is Captain Wise, what are you doing? Are you trying to steal my treasure? “No” Captain replied. Captain Wise tied them up onto a tree. Captain said himself “ I feel sleepy maybe I should go sleep, and he did.

Captain Hook and his crew was so scared, Captain Hook just remembered he had his sword in his pocket, so he chopped off the rope and they ran away. But Captain Hook just remembered the treasure. The crew ran back and carefully took the treasure while Captain Wise was sleeping.

They all ran to the ship and they lived happily ever after. THE END.

Friday 1 April 2016

Year 5 & 6 Camp

WALT: Write an interesting recount 



This is a presentation about the year 5 & 6 camp, It was very fun I just want to say thank you to the teachers, Mr Burt and the cookers that cooked our dinner and breakfast and the security people that guide us well we were sleeping and the parents that was helping us clean our dishes. Thank you to the teachers that made this especially Mr Burt. I hope you check my other posts, Bye.