Olympic Narrative

WALT: Narrate a story about an Olympic athlete getting lost in Barra, Rio

One day Valerie Adams went to the airport to go fly to Brazil, Barra because she is going to compete in the Olympics. Valerie Adams was competing for the women’s shot put, when she got to Barra she hopped into a bus to the mall.

One day Valerie Adams went to the airport to go fly to Brazil, Barra because she is going to compete in the Olympics. Valerie Adams was competing for the women’s shot put, when she got to Barra she hopped into a bus to the mall.

But when Valerie was looking outside when she looked out of the window she was that the bus went past the mall. She was screaming “ STOP, STOP THE BUS, I NEED TO GET OFF!!” But the bus driver didn’t listen, Valerie Adams started to cry but quietly.

Suddenly the bus stopped, Valerie wiped her tears away. “GET OFF”  the bus driver shouted. Everyone went out of the bus but Valerie was confused. She didn’t even know where she was. Everyone left but Valerie Adams was just staring, her stomaching started aching, she was so cold.

After a few hours she saw some cars coming, she waved her hands. Then a light blue car stopped and said “Do you need help” “ Yes, I do thanks for your help” replied Valerie Adams. “ Can you take me to the mall in Barra” said Valerie Adams, so they drove off.

It took 2 hours to get to the mall, finally Valerie Adams got to the mall. She thanked the driver and she went into the mall. She went to the Olympics and came 2nd in the shot put.

Narrative Writing

Walt: narrate a story that involves a boy, camping and a family that needs food.

The Hungry Family

One morning Bob and his friends wanted to go camping at Kawau Island because it was his birthday.So mum dropped off Bob and his friends but it was a long ride it took  about 3 ½ hours. They finally made it so they put their tents up.

Once they finished Bob suggested “ Let's go and explore the woods”. They walked a long way until they saw a family who were very sad. Bob said “ Umm excuse why are you sad?” The father said “ Well my family and I forgot our food,Can you please hand me some of your food? We are starving” So then Bob ran to the camping site to see if there was some more food but…..

Bob tripped and saw the bushes moving, his heart was pounding very hard his throat was dry then he heard someone said his name “Bob”.Bob thought for one second he had goosebumps. After that Bob was too scared so he just ran.

Bob finally made it to the camping site then Bob dived into the tent, he threw everything out of the tent, Then he raced to the family they were still sitting on the floor so then, Bob and the father had a long conversation about how they had left their food at home.

So Bob felt sad and confused at the same time, Bob looked at the little kids crying because they were hungry so Bob gave some of his food and said “ But next time remember your food”

The Family were so thankful, Bob and his friends walked back to their camping site and the family lived happily ever after.